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a minimalist necklace

I I b c art art I I b c old old I I b c ash ash I I b c one one I I b c all all y ell

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Date: 4/9/2025 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Thriveni on word sparkling winning necklace poem. Brilliant.
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Date: 4/9/2025 9:34:00 PM
I am glad you liked this write dear poet, thank you so much for your kind visit and precious time. thank you.
Date: 4/5/2025 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on winning with this Thriveni.' Its minimalisim and phonetic implication conveys so much, and yet there is so much We could be enriched by? And some indeed Will be.' All blessings to you.'
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Date: 4/6/2025 1:17:00 AM
I am grateful to you for this sweet words and your unique interpretation, yes some truths we never realize till we live it, like old age, futility of possessions etc. As you put it dear friend, 'there is so much we could be enriched by'. Thank you so much for your kind words and blessings dear poet. Means so much to me. thank you.
Date: 4/5/2025 7:31:00 AM
What an imaginative poem my friend. Congratulations on your high placement in this poetry contest. Although we cherish art, we shall all become old one day, turn to ash and bring with us no necklace. So true. Wish you a blessed weekend.
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Date: 4/5/2025 8:05:00 AM
I am thrilled by your analysis dear poet. precious. Thank you very much for your kind visit, your thoughtful words add sparkle to my humble write. I am grateful to you for the good wishes. thank you dear friend.
Date: 4/4/2025 11:47:00 AM
This is uniquely awesome. Congrats.
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Date: 4/4/2025 6:36:00 PM
Your pleasant words is music to me dear friend, thank you so much for your kind visit and cheers. thank you dear poet.
Date: 4/4/2025 11:30:00 AM
I don’t know that the words had meaning but I adored the necklace! Congrats!
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Date: 4/4/2025 6:35:00 PM
This new form I learnt from poet Brian Strand's blog. be old, see old... reading gives different meaning. It is two lines short form that I liked so much I made a string of it dear friend. I am glad you liked it friend. Thank you dear poet very much for your visit and sweet words. thank you.
Date: 4/4/2025 10:17:00 AM
Interesting. That's a lovely necklace. Congratulations, fellow poet!
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Date: 4/4/2025 6:30:00 PM
Thank you dear friend for your kind visit and words. I am glad you liked it. Thank you dear poet.
Date: 4/3/2025 6:41:00 AM
Creative work. Way to go. I enjoyed the design. Sara K
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Date: 4/3/2025 7:57:00 AM
I am glad you liked it dear friend. Thank you for your kind visit and lovely words, thank you dear poet.
Date: 4/3/2025 6:39:00 AM
Hi thriveni that is amazing a necklace with a message, have a lovely day.
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Date: 4/3/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you for your precious time and pleasant words, means so much to me. thank you.
Date: 4/3/2025 2:11:00 AM
Great shape. Never did one in my life.
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Date: 4/3/2025 3:56:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I came across this short form poem in poet Brian Strand's blog Minimalist moment, I made a string of it. I am honored by your generous comment, thank you dear poet, means so much to me.
Date: 4/2/2025 8:40:00 PM
How unique!! I love how the letters represent see and be. Creative!!! <3 xxx
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Date: 4/3/2025 3:52:00 AM
I am flattered dear friend. thank you for your kind visit and sweet words. you made my day. thank you dear poet.

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