A Mind Made Up

a stain doused with bleach, 
     scrubbed with power grout brush
           yet stubbornly remains.
   confrontation with a mind made up...
                  a losing battle.



Bitesize Poem No.54 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
Date written: 10/30/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Seeker Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 3:53 AM
Wise observation, Edward. Why struggle, wabi-sabi stains are beautiful
Ibeh Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 5:08 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
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