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A Million Suns

each pore of form a door each cell represents the whole Holy Spirit manifests as magnetism soul becomes living light scriptures extol a million suns illuminate our head ovoid from a centreless fulcrum we expand how can form contain the energy yet before you, here we stand

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Date: 9/10/2023 5:58:00 AM
"A million suns illuminate our head ovoid" This is such a brilliantly articulated and wonderful write with captivating wordplay and lines.. "Each cell represents the whole" Very deep.. "Holy Spirit manifests as magnetism" So artistically crafted with myriad evocative tones..
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Date: 9/10/2023 6:47:00 AM
So delighted you enjoyed this write, Hiya :)
Date: 9/10/2023 1:12:00 AM
Compare our suns to holy grace and the Holy Spirit will work wonders.
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:51:00 AM
Grace is always available if we choose not to resist the omnipresent divine current.
Date: 9/10/2023 12:41:00 AM
I love the smacking subtly of this, such a great use of few words. Well done and thanks.
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Date: 9/10/2023 1:51:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph

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