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A Million Fairytales

Fleeting into the ebon night, a million fairytales tremble at us. Never cursed or full of deep blight. I embrace you, you hold me tight. For our love loses not insight. Sounds of swift ivory doves cry out. They know how our love does outshine with flickering light. Descending onto my grateful knees, I knew the pain of loss and pain you carried with ease. Black Ravens plague this existence. Saturated in loneliness were you, yet you stay with me. I faced before you attains, longing for my hopelessness to cease. I sense your essence in the breeze. Weeping in the forsaken land, for I am but a man craving to be near you. Sweetheart you are my perpetual connection! For all of eternity my desolated heart remains, bound by love and affection. The wind blows and gusts prevail, intense obscurity of the calamity. As the tempest rages in warm rains. your genuine affection sustains. A million fairytales tremble at us. My alleviation found in perfection and... I shall feel this pure affection, weeping in the forsaken land. Or you my beloved, eternally bound by love and affection, fleeting into the ebon night. Written September 7th for Lu’s Poem Switcher-Roo contest.

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Laura Leiser

Date: 10/17/2019 11:54:00 PM

Excellent poetry, Richard! So enjoyed this, a fave!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2019 12:52:00 AM

Thanks Laura. ;0)

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/10/2019 6:56:00 AM

So powerful with amazing imagery! I really enjoy reading your work :-) x

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thanks Elaine, that makes my day. Hugs Rick.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/15/2019 11:17:00 AM

Beautifully done with excellent imagery. Lovely. God Bless, JB

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2019 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Judy.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/15/2019 6:50:00 AM

A POETRY AS JUST THE GREAT DO ,,, FULL OF IMAGES AND ALLUSIONS ... FULL OF LOVE AND PURE FEELINGS .. CONGRATS SALUTE DEAR RICHARD ALKAS

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/15/2019 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Alkas.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/10/2019 4:43:00 PM

A great piece Richard, full of great imagery and expression. A superb piece indeed!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 4:56:00 PM

Thanks Gordon.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2019 4:13:00 PM

The imagery here is off the map, Richard. I see it's the old switcheroo!! Oh boy, I don't know how to pull this one off. But you sure did it super well.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 4:56:00 PM

It seemed to come together. Thanks Andrea.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/10/2019 12:57:00 PM

Powerfully emotional; good luck in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 5:06:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and luck.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/10/2019 8:47:00 AM

So much emotion in this creative re-do for the contest..I like the way you started and ended your poem..all the best, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 9:14:00 AM

Thanks Vijay.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/9/2019 9:36:00 PM

"A million fairy-tales tremble at us" Just thinking about it, makes my heart race. Such vivid images you paint with your words. Leaving me in complete awe. An ever after of moments tangling the heart. This is so beautifully written and presented. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 7:34:00 AM

Thanks Brandy, you are kind. Hugs Rick.

Lyric Man

Date: 9/9/2019 8:18:00 PM

I’ve never read a ‘Richard’ work that did not envelop me in thought and emotion. You paint with words as a Master Poet and play upon heart strings of authenticity and vulnerability so tangible that one can taste the experience you pen. You Sir, will always be my teacher!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 7:35:00 AM

You are generous, thanks for your thoughtful comment and visit.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/9/2019 1:32:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Richard ... Life's own fairytale - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/10/2019 7:38:00 AM

The compliment belongs to Lu Loo as they are her words rearranged. Thanks for the visit and the hug Anne-Lise. Hugs Rick

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/9/2019 11:58:00 AM

You did this so well, I barely recognized it as Luloo's words. I am sure she will be impressed Rick! : ) xxoo

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 1:16:00 PM

Thanks Connie, you are sweet.

Funom Makama

Date: 9/9/2019 10:41:00 AM

This should definitely get the win. Witty and entertaining.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Funom.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/9/2019 10:23:00 AM

Very well crafted my friend...ready for a win Richard...^WW^ :o)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 10:25:00 AM

I hope so! Thanks.

Maria Williams

Date: 9/9/2019 1:16:00 AM

Your love towards your loved one is like a million fairy-tales. One can feel the beauty of it in every line of yours. This poem is a Winner in my eyes Rick, however good luck in the contest. A POTD for sure. A fave for my list.....Maria Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 2:00:00 AM

That would be nice. Thanks for the glowing comment. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/8/2019 8:23:00 PM

Ahhh finally a new one and you have not disappointed my friend! Loved it!;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 1:59:00 AM

So glad You enjoyed this one. Most of the credit goes to Lu Loo. I merely rearranged her words.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 9/8/2019 5:18:00 PM

Very nice Richard. I know not of these contests or rules, but it seems to me if this is what you wrote accordingly, then surely you are a winner!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 1:14:00 AM

Glad you like it Jeff, much appreciated.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 9/8/2019 3:25:00 PM

Hi Richard, another excellent piece from your pen. Another strong write that touches the heart and stirs the emotions. Another jewel from your treasure-trove Richard. A fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 1:13:00 AM

You are good for my ego Mike. Hugs Rick.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/8/2019 10:55:00 AM

A romantic medley of words which you have interlaced to produce a gem - you are talented my friend. Hugs, jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 1:12:00 AM

You are kind, thanks Jennifer. ;0)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/8/2019 10:25:00 AM

rich, weaving this poem with a different perspective is incredible... all the best!...huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 1:12:00 AM

Thanks Nette, hugs Rick.

Silent One

Date: 9/8/2019 7:56:00 AM

Now this is full of romantic lines and that last stanza is just great...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thanks, not my words I just rearranged the lines. Ta da!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/8/2019 7:02:00 AM

So beautifully descriptive, romantic and sweet--then, the end! Janice

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Janice.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/8/2019 2:13:00 AM

You've done a brilliant job with this one Richard. Good luck. Tom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Tom.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2019 11:35:00 PM

Hi Richard, I saw Laura's original poem and I must say you did a great job with the 'switcha roo". I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend my friend:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/8/2019 12:28:00 AM

Thanks Alexis. ;0)