A Midnight Walk

No stellar night sky can compare
To your long enchanting black hair
The moon is jealous of your radiance 
Venus tries to ignore your elegance
Nebulas now appear too dull
Your aura, the most colorful

Your eyes are like a vast black hole
Consuming all, my entire soul
You are the solar wind that makes me dance
Like the aurora. such a sublime trance
The most graceful comet you are
My compass points to you, my star

I'm stuck here on the lonely ground
Wishing for you to come around
Super Novas explode in my small mind
They're thoughts of you, the most beautiful kind
I miss the way we used to talk 
Memories of a midnight walk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Selfa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:41 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Trevor on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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February 6, 2016 at 6:20 AM
TREVOR, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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February 6, 2016 at 2:16 AM
Trevor, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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February 11, 2014 at 8:12 PM
Love it Trevor, . Hugs* SKAT
Barnett Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 11:15 PM
Thank you very much, the nice comment is much appreciated!
Mehta Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 12:19 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, trevor
Barnett Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thank you very much Dr.Ram Metha!
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January 7, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Trevor, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA
Barnett Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much Linda, and you're very welcome.
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December 27, 2013 at 2:09 AM
Trevor, it is beautiful and romantic. A bit sad when missing the magic, like those above... Thank you for sharing, the full color in a wonderful romantic strolling walk.... xox...Linda
Barnett Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Thank you! Yes, there is a bit of tragedy in this poem; however, these are the beautiful memories I have.
Davis Avatar
December 15, 2013 at 1:15 PM
Trevor Such a beautiful and passionate write. The love and devotion you have for this special person is felt from beginning to end. Nice job
Barnett Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 12:17 AM
Thank you so much!
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