A Midnight Walk

No stellar night sky can compare
To your long enchanting black hair
The moon is jealous of your radiance 
Venus tries to ignore your elegance
Nebulas now appear too dull
Your aura, the most colorful

Your eyes are like a vast black hole
Consuming all, my entire soul
You are the solar wind that makes me dance
Like the aurora. such a sublime trance
The most graceful comet you are
My compass points to you, my star

I'm stuck here on the lonely ground
Wishing for you to come around
Super Novas explode in my small mind
They're thoughts of you, the most beautiful kind
I miss the way we used to talk 
Memories of a midnight walk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/8/2016 8:41:00 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Trevor on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:20:00 AM
TREVOR, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:16:00 AM
Trevor, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:12:00 PM
Love it Trevor, . Hugs* SKAT
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 2/12/2014 11:15:00 PM
Thank you very much, the nice comment is much appreciated!
Date: 2/5/2014 12:19:00 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, trevor
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 2/5/2014 11:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr.Ram Metha!
Date: 1/7/2014 10:05:00 AM
Trevor, .. Congratulations:) thank you for supporting my contest...... xOx ~LINDA
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 1/8/2014 4:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda, and you're very welcome.
Date: 12/27/2013 2:09:00 AM
Trevor, it is beautiful and romantic. A bit sad when missing the magic, like those above... Thank you for sharing, the full color in a wonderful romantic strolling walk.... xox...Linda
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 12/27/2013 8:20:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, there is a bit of tragedy in this poem; however, these are the beautiful memories I have.
Date: 12/15/2013 1:15:00 PM
Trevor Such a beautiful and passionate write. The love and devotion you have for this special person is felt from beginning to end. Nice job
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Trevor Barnett
Date: 12/16/2013 12:17:00 AM
Thank you so much!
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