A Metaphor of Men
People usually compare women to:
Slimming trees, or exquisite flowers
Showing elegance, and emitting fragrance...
I would rather compare men to:
A Piece of land, or a pile of soil
They might be poor or rich...
And no matter how to do
No soil can Plant be least alive
It ought to be a thing which is mostly true
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