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A Metamorphis Quaternion

FOUR SEASONS  (lanterne sequence)
May
breezes
in the trees

High summer
lightens
long

Fall
tints red
Autumn's stall

Asleep,winter
acts as
dead

QUATERNION   (free verse)

Ah, Spring come again, the
warmth, the rain, yellows and
green.Grass, winds, blossom
bright,showers of life aloud in
the sky

Then Summer, her
beauty displays.
All nature in
flower, eye-catchingly dressed
to attract; then mellow vistas
bedeck the view with largesse,

bountiful Fall’s into our arms
to sustain our sleep in quietness

of Winter’s cold indoor nights

For Debbie;s Metamorph contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/1/2013 6:02:00 PM
Brian, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD
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Date: 4/29/2013 2:19:00 PM
Very descriptive and creative winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Soup Mail soon..Sara
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Date: 4/28/2013 9:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win~A.O
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Date: 4/25/2013 3:50:00 PM
So glad to read your work again. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/25/2013 10:16:00 AM
Many congratulations Brian, xx
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Date: 4/15/2013 5:11:00 PM
If I were pressed to pick a favorite....between these two.......I would decline! They are divine both on their own merits.....(however....I'm leaning towards the original.....just lovely (love the way it ends!!).......(hmm on second thought)... oh they are both beautiful! :)
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