A Metamorphis Quaternion

FOUR SEASONS  (lanterne sequence)
May
breezes
in the trees

High summer
lightens
long

Fall
tints red
Autumn's stall

Asleep,winter
acts as
dead

QUATERNION   (free verse)

Ah, Spring come again, the
warmth, the rain, yellows and
green.Grass, winds, blossom
bright,showers of life aloud in
the sky

Then Summer, her
beauty displays.
All nature in
flower, eye-catchingly dressed
to attract; then mellow vistas
bedeck the view with largesse,

bountiful Fall’s into our arms
to sustain our sleep in quietness

of Winter’s cold indoor nights

For Debbie;s Metamorph contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 1, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Brian, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Very descriptive and creative winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Soup Mail soon..Sara
Oyewole Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Congrats on your win~A.O
Guzzi Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 3:50 PM
So glad to read your work again. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Many congratulations Brian, xx
Richards Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 5:11 PM
If I were pressed to pick a favorite....between these two.......I would decline! They are divine both on their own merits.....(however....I'm leaning towards the original.....just lovely (love the way it ends!!).......(hmm on second thought)... oh they are both beautiful! :)
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