---A Messy Matron

a messy matron
polishes the silver--
the teapot whistles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Ahhh, this one says a lot!! Luv, andrea
Austin Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 5:49 AM
I think I understand this, Deborah - Put off until tomorrow by all means. Be happy! Yes? Love, daver
Culverhouse Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Massage teacher, is that for fun?
Culverhouse Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 6:30 AM
enjoyed, could be humurous or very heartfelt. I like both ideas!!
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 6:37 PM
I enjoyed the images
Tapley Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Wow! This a terrific poem! I really like the second line. I have days when i feel like the first line! Excellent work.
Kendrick Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 3:45 PM
That is the way I feel most of the time lately __like the disheveled matron..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Sweet Senryu Debbie and luv your first line.. have company for a few days so am taking time commenting when I can... enjoyed your creative touch today..luv.. Linda-Marie
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