A Message To a Friend

My friend,when darkness befalls you
When hope just seem to perish
When life is full of lies
And everything just tastes foul

Remember a friend is here for you
Before you go out of our reach
I would hold you in my arms
And i wouldn't let you fall

Do not keep the sadness within you
Let it out,and let it vanish
Let tears rain from your eyes
And wash the sadness from your soul

For a life is still within you
I know life is going to be tough
But you can't loose your smile
Endure and conquer it all

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Date: 11/19/2014 4:55:00 PM
Isaac, A most beautiful lyric tribute here to Catie! Congratulations on your win!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:10:00 AM
Thank you, Isaac
Date: 11/19/2014 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your Isaac
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Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 11/20/2014 4:09:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/19/2014 9:05:00 AM
Yes, a great truth shared, Isaac. Thank you. Endurance is the most important aspect of "keep on keeping on." I remember the fable of the tortoise and the hare. The persistent one is the one who wins! Congratulations.
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:07:00 AM
Yup endurance is key to everything. Thank you Cona
Date: 11/18/2014 4:46:00 PM
Friends are so so precious - a gem of a write - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2014 8:59:00 PM
yup every one needs a true friend and thank you so so much :) hugs Isaac
Date: 11/18/2014 5:31:00 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup..and thanks for your beautiful poetry..Charma
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Isaac C Lalduhawma
Date: 11/18/2014 5:39:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 11/17/2014 9:44:00 PM
Isaac, thank you for sharing this heartwarming poem about friendship and courage. Everyone needs a friend like this! Victoria
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Date: 11/18/2014 4:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Victoria. It makes me really really happy that people are actually reading my poem and liking it.
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