A Message

A dirty red thought
Slipped on the cheeks
Rolled down the neck
Touched the beadedbreast
And disappeared in the ether
Like an endless message...
To your heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lander Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 7:43 AM
and you left me wanting more great write..
Palmer Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 6:40 AM
nice write Valentin
Bogatinoski Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Thank You very much. Valentin
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 2:37 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Sara
Bogatinoski Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Thank You very much. Valentin
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