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A Mere Shadow

The world is a mere shadow a shadow of things that will never be a shadow of those things that will never leave me stuck in my brain and sure to stay the world a mere shadow in ones self so out of reach wanting to be loved is all i need but can someone love me just for me can i let go of the unimportant and let the sun shine through the shadows of darkness that dwell inside myself and shed light upon my broken heart for i can only try

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Date: 1/19/2012 5:39:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of inspiration...my poetry comes from hard and trying times in my life..thank you all...
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Date: 1/19/2012 2:54:00 PM
Lovely. A quiet poem that flows deep.
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Date: 1/19/2012 12:54:00 PM
A nice read :-)
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Date: 1/19/2012 9:19:00 AM
The lurking shadows that put out the light within us.....very creative. Let your inner light shine and chase them to the corners. Enjoyed reading this !!
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Date: 1/19/2012 9:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Cheryl. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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