A Memory

I close my eyes and I am there
That heavenly place that you and I shared
We stroll hand in hand along the path
Living and laughing as in the past

The waterfalls and strong evergreens
Enormous boulders and falling leaves
A mountain top view of a town below
A misting rain mixed with snow

The chill of the air upon my skin
A kiss to warm me once again
Your brilliant eyes and gentle smile
Your silly antics; my heart goes wild

A spiritual journey for you and me
So this is where I choose to be
Living and feeling what I believe
And loving you for eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/24/2009 9:00:00 AM
So delicate and gentle culminating in a warm and perpetual finish. This was very soothing and comforting to me. Thank you for the warm welcome.
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Date: 11/22/2009 2:06:00 PM
This piece of yours brought back similar memories to me. My love is lost however unfortunatly, but it was nice to relive those moments with such an emotionally heartfelt and moving well written piece. Great Work Lena. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 11/17/2009 10:05:00 AM
this is very nice indeed. thanx for your letter but I have to deal with my depression and hopefully manage it better.I am trying but it's not easy.I will read more of your poems.Please read some of mine.
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:38:00 AM
enjoyed today!
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:05:00 PM
Beautifully written. Vince
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Date: 11/13/2009 4:31:00 PM
Beautiful sentiment here, Lena.
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Date: 11/10/2009 1:53:00 AM
I love this but I am sorry for your loss. With sadness comes a longing to express oneself, and with these words, you have accomplished so much.
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Date: 11/8/2009 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for your blog comments Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:21:00 AM
a gorgeous tribute to your Dear One you lost.....extremely well written! Lena! jimbo
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Date: 11/5/2009 10:03:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:09:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! Great imagery, rhyme and excellent flow! I love this and I am choosing this as one of my favs! Thanks for sharing this. Peace, love, Audrey
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