A Mask

Bogus is his art
As he hides behind a screen
Dare he question me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 21, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Hi Jeremiah Your writing is wonderful. I have a sensitive heart too. Don't let your critics get you down. Some are food for thought challenging our better half, other's are out for negative attention because that's the only kind they know how to get. They put other's down to make themselves feel better. Just let it go hun....Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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May 20, 2009 at 9:48 PM
who is making false claims on my friend?we all meet bogus in life one time or another,bogus makes us become stronger in our ideas,and i met your Alley she's here isnt she,didnt know she was here,she is sweet as her name---marry bro:-)charma
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