A Mask

Bogus is his art As he hides behind a screen Dare he question me

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P Sheart

Date: 5/21/2009 1:49:00 PM

Hi Jeremiah Your writing is wonderful. I have a sensitive heart too. Don't let your critics get you down. Some are food for thought challenging our better half, other's are out for negative attention because that's the only kind they know how to get. They put other's down to make themselves feel better. Just let it go hun....Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/20/2009 9:48:00 PM

who is making false claims on my friend?we all meet bogus in life one time or another,bogus makes us become stronger in our ideas,and i met your Alley she's here isnt she,didnt know she was here,she is sweet as her name---marry bro:-)charma