A Map of Possibilities

Things confuse me easily these days 
it might be age or some kind of rare 
oncoming dementia preparing me for 
a difficult but joyous passage of elder 
time fulfilling my wildest dreams or perhaps 
a period of prolonged revelation of prophecies 
and keys that I alone will possess and heads 
of State and ministers and elegant dignitaries 
will stand in line to have an audience with me 
just to have the good 
fortune of hearing a 
few pearls of wisdom
that will completely change
their perceptions and ways of thinking about
governing irritated populations that will make
them realize that harmony amongst all the peoples 
of the world is a great and simple thing a kind of Babel in reverse and that the hunger for power for conquest and for control is a long and twisted journey over too many broken bodies of thought too many centuries down dark and lonely roads
with no demarcations or clues 
no sacrificial boundaries and a 
wasted expense of Capital on tanks and rockets and plutonium and the building up of armies instead of cultivating an educated and healthy populace capable of enjoying their lives and nature without destroying it and each other 
and that pointing fingers 
and screaming and filling valleys and neighborhoods with rivers of blood and lifeless bodies old and young is much less profitable and will prove over the long haul that the myriad unknowns and commonalities and fears we all share are far less destructive than the surface disparities that somehow always manage to turn into declarations of aggression and oppression and the bankrupting of moralities and policies and families…

or maybe it has to do with my 
not getting enough sleep last night
or something to do with changes in my 
eating habits or the climate or a reaction 
to the round-the-clock radio waves 
that surround us all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/1/2016 2:09:00 PM
Congrats Barry, Great Write/Great Read
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Barry Levy
Date: 8/2/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words.
Date: 8/1/2016 5:35:00 AM
A very captivating piece!! Congrats Barry, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Barry Levy
Date: 8/2/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thanks for your kind encouragement.
Date: 7/31/2016 9:20:00 PM
"... a kind of Babel in reverse" - :) I like that line! One among many interesting lines! I love how it gets REAL deep and though-provoking, with the oppression and bankrupting of moralities... and then goes into a lighthearted ending of changing eating habits haha Very cool read. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Barry Levy
Date: 8/2/2016 11:49:00 AM
You are very kind. And thank you for explaining the long list of "winners."
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Becca Teagan
Date: 7/31/2016 9:22:00 PM
PS. Everyone got a first place win this time as this was more of a challenge than a contest.
Date: 7/31/2016 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations Barry, I enjoyed the read...
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Barry Levy
Date: 8/2/2016 11:49:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/31/2016 10:59:00 AM
Congrats xxxx 1st xx
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Barry Levy
Date: 7/31/2016 1:11:00 PM
I found it. There were a whole lot of other first place winners.
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Barry Levy
Date: 7/31/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, but I took a look around and couldn't find any mention of it. Where do I look?
Date: 7/31/2016 8:57:00 AM
Hi Barry, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved- 7:-) Alexis
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Barry Levy
Date: 8/2/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words and assisting my search in search of myself.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/31/2016 1:25:00 PM
Hi Barry , Go to completed contest. Then click on "If I could change the world". You are on the list.:)Alexis
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Barry Levy
Date: 7/31/2016 1:10:00 PM
I found it. There were a whole lot of other first place winners.
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Barry Levy
Date: 7/31/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you so much. I took a look at the list of contest winners, but didn't see my name. Where do I look?
Date: 7/31/2016 6:40:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win with these fascinating words. Enjoyed it. :) Sunita
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Barry Levy
Date: 7/31/2016 1:10:00 PM
I found it. There were a whole lot of other first place winners.
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Barry Levy
Date: 7/31/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thanks very much, but where do I find out about this? I took a look at the contest winners listing and I was nowhere to be found. Where is it listed? How did you find our about it?
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