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A Manatee's Pace

Awakened with need to visit restroom, did make that run Dizziness hits with faintiness, feelings of passing totalily out, falling Ambulance was called early in morn; Princess could have outrun How could anything so slow bounce and twist when crawling Snail's pace arrived alive, then Manatee pace looked after appalling Contest:Shaz Cheesman Contest: 50 words

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Date: 5/31/2012 1:52:00 PM
love the way you've used this form for 50 words, my friend - hope you are feeling well again
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Date: 5/31/2012 8:31:00 AM
wish you well in the contest,great piece
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Date: 5/30/2012 5:49:00 AM
good luck in contest
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Date: 5/29/2012 5:02:00 PM
Way to do the challenge, Sara. I might look thru old etheree poems and try to find one that used fifty words more or less and just play with it. I am dying to do the rictometer contest too.
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Date: 5/29/2012 4:22:00 PM
great poem sara!
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Date: 5/29/2012 4:02:00 PM
ohh, charming me with your delightful piece, sara... best of luck and huggs!
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Date: 5/29/2012 3:56:00 PM
Beautiful and intriguing. One of my favourite creatures used to express slowness and vunrability I believe. Tyvm Sara
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