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A Lover's Lament

In the ethereal grace of twilight
at the court of flowering grove
under the radiance of moonlit night,
Recall, on my knees I vowed my love
cooing like a docile mourning dove.

In the soft breeze swaying and dancing
the branches of the majestic oak tree
rustling their leaves and sweeping
the fragrance of sweet shrub free
a mood of mystical ecstasy on me.

But with mischief in your enticing eyes,
On your luscious lips a beguiling smile
you escaped from me like lover’s sighs
Abandoning me like a foggy haunted isle,
Lo! I am woebegone by thy heartless wile.


~Contest: "L" Lament Poetry
~Sponsor: Constance La France.

~08/08/2015
~English Quintain contest by Francine Roberts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/22/2021 9:59:00 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your win in my L contest with your wonderful poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/16/2021 10:16:00 AM
"Lo! I am woebegone by thy heartless wile." Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:39:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:55:00 AM
Abdul - Your poem is very creative and impressive, your win most deserved - congratulations ... CayCay
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/29/2015 9:46:00 AM
Thanks CayCay.
Date: 9/29/2015 1:16:00 AM
Very wonderful quintain abdul! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:13:00 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:43:00 PM
congrats on your winning entry , great job
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/29/2015 9:47:00 AM
Appreciate much.
Date: 8/10/2015 11:00:00 AM
this is beautiful Abdul - I especially like the final stanza good luck! Hugs Jan xx
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