A Lovely Rose Flower

Hey Lovely Rose Flower!
I like you very much

Your lovely Soft Leaves
How Nice it is to Touch

Hey Lovely Rose Flower!
I like your Petals very much

How Beautiful you’re Design
Like a Fruit Bunch

When Honey-Bee comes to take Honey,
They get cheery to found like some Money

Hey Lovely Rose Flower!
I like you very much
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Effendi Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Hello umair. Nice poetry brother. Nice to see my fellow countryman on soup among my friends n family from across the globe. Thanks for your comment on my poem estranged love. Best wishes, Taha
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August 26, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Hello Umari, just stopping by to say congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
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August 26, 2010 at 8:12 AM
HI UMAIR, GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~
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August 25, 2010 at 11:13 AM
congrats on your feature!
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Umair. Love, Carol
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August 23, 2010 at 6:06 AM
I noticed my rose plant I thought was dead this morning had one lone red rose bloom and kind of sad. congrats on the featured poem this week!!
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August 19, 2010 at 4:13 PM
All like the rose. I am also one among them. I also like your rosy poem, a lovely poem
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August 18, 2010 at 7:34 PM
I would like to thank Jamecia, Linda, Dr. Ram Mehta and Carol for loving and admiring my first poem at PoetrySoup, it's all my pleasure to be with you guys :)
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 4:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Umair. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 4:09 AM
A nice write on rose lovely rose, Umair
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August 17, 2010 at 9:07 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight...looking forward to many more..with luv..
Buggs Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 8:25 PM
I enjoyed this poem.......very good :)
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