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A Lovely Day

You gave me a sunny day When drenched in rain in May As the sky fell on my head I needed a niche under a shed. The day held my lone hand Took me to an emerald island Where the sun shined on the slope Told me don't lose hope. When the full moon passed me by Stardust showered from the satin sky The whispering breeze of ecstasy Told me you were not far from me. Sweet spurt of spring fragrance blew Draped me with the yearning hue With the gifted day joy in me grew I found in me fathomless fervor so new. In the spectral flair of the sunburst sky My love grew wings to fly In the rippling air and soar far away With you on this lovely day. ____________________ February 24, 2022 Contest : A Lovely Day Sponsored by : BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 3/4/2022 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "A Lovely Day" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 3/2/2022 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your first-place poem <3 Thank you for entering the contest, have a blessed day! :)
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Date: 2/24/2022 7:20:00 AM
A lovely day for me is a mélange of rain and sun. So what you describe would be my perfect lovely day. A great entry my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 2/24/2022 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie for visiting. Have a nice day.

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