A Lovely Clockwork

our hearts are in synch
spiritually beating
a physical rhyme

tempo increases
fluency arises from
movement so sublime

our quiet rhythm
a lovely clockwork
without space and time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/25/2010 4:23:00 PM
Corey, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/23/2010 12:12:00 PM
Thanks! I haven't been around in a while, just busy with life and I found my email flooded with comments this morning so I came back and look! I got featured! :D Thanks so much! I wrote this poem about dancing... I just think it's so fluid and cool when two peopel are so coordinated in a dance. :D
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Date: 3/23/2010 9:39:00 AM
well written. all I wanted to say was--I just like it!! Tim
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:50:00 AM
I realy like this. Guy-Adler
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Date: 3/23/2010 3:41:00 AM
Nice one, Corey. Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 3:22:00 PM
Short and rhythmic. Says just enough. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Corey. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
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Date: 3/21/2010 5:19:00 PM
A nice display of poetry. Congratulations on your featured peom. Ernilando
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Date: 3/21/2010 12:00:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 10/20/2009 11:07:00 AM
Thank you for presenting your wonderful poetry to us today. It was an enjoyable read for me. Thank you Corey. Love, Carol
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