A Lovely Clockwork

our hearts are in synch
spiritually beating
a physical rhyme

tempo increases
fluency arises from
movement so sublime

our quiet rhythm
a lovely clockwork
without space and time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Corey, Congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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March 23, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Thanks! I haven't been around in a while, just busy with life and I found my email flooded with comments this morning so I came back and look! I got featured! :D Thanks so much! I wrote this poem about dancing... I just think it's so fluid and cool when two peopel are so coordinated in a dance. :D
Kitchen Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 9:39 AM
well written. all I wanted to say was--I just like it!! Tim
Dorelien Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 3:50 AM
I realy like this. Guy-Adler
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March 23, 2010 at 3:41 AM
Nice one, Corey. Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann
Austin Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Short and rhythmic. Says just enough. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Corey. Love, Carol
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March 22, 2010 at 5:03 AM
Congrats on the featured poem---well done!!
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March 21, 2010 at 5:19 PM
A nice display of poetry. Congratulations on your featured peom. Ernilando
Fisher Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Thank you for presenting your wonderful poetry to us today. It was an enjoyable read for me. Thank you Corey. Love, Carol
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