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A Love To Last a Lifetime

Our love lasted a lifetime nobody's as shocked as I'm. So many years to remember passion hot as fireplace amber. Fifty years dreaming of you every year my love grew. Gave me a wonderful life always been an amazing wife. Something wish I could give another lifetime we could live.

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Jean Murray

Date: 1/17/2018 1:40:00 AM

Just beautiful Carl. Exactly what I have missed.

Carl Jent
Date: 1/19/2018 6:26:00 PM

Thanks Jean, A quick poem for a contest. It says everything I feel, I am not sure of the quality of poetry. 10 lines with 5 words can only say so much. Thank you again.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/16/2018 9:44:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem ... Indeed wonderful life ...

Carl Jent
Date: 1/19/2018 6:28:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, one can only say so much in 50 words and 10 lines. I appreciate your comment. Thanks

John Gondolf

Date: 1/16/2018 7:53:00 AM

Very nicely written, Wayne, best of luck. John

Carl Jent
Date: 1/19/2018 6:29:00 PM

Thanks John, It was fun trying to put so much into such a short 50 words. Thanks for reading and commenting.