Carl Jent Poet Rhyme

A Love To Last a Lifetime

 Our love lasted a lifetime
nobody's as shocked as I'm.

So many years to remember
passion hot as fireplace amber.

Fifty years dreaming of you
every year my love grew.

Gave me a wonderful life
always been an amazing wife.

Something wish I could give
another lifetime we could live.

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Jean Murray January 17, 2018 at 1:40 AM Just beautiful Carl. Exactly what I have missed. Carl Jent January 19, 2018 at 6:26 PM Thanks Jean, A quick poem for a contest. It says everything I feel, I am not sure of the quality of poetry. 10 lines with 5 words can only say so much. Thank you again.

Probir Gupta January 16, 2018 at 9:44 AM Enjoyed reading your poem ... Indeed wonderful life ... Carl Jent January 19, 2018 at 6:28 PM Thanks for the comment, one can only say so much in 50 words and 10 lines. I appreciate your comment. Thanks

John Gondolf January 16, 2018 at 7:53 AM Very nicely written, Wayne, best of luck. John Carl Jent January 19, 2018 at 6:29 PM Thanks John, It was fun trying to put so much into such a short 50 words. Thanks for reading and commenting.