Mick Talbot Poet Rhyme

A Love To Last a Lifetime

A LOVE TO LAST A LIFETIME

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Lucky me, love, a lifetime.
My dearest and me together,
until the end, love divine,
each day so much pleasure.
Helps our love to langure.
When two becomes so fun,
Not one word of anger,
Two hearts beating as one.
The rapturous pain of love.
A gift from One above

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13th January 2018
Entered in 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme II - Poetry Contest sponsored by Laura Loo

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Line Gauthier January 21, 2018 at 9:13 PM Charming poem, Mick. Congrats on your win. Mick Talbot January 22, 2018 at 3:35 AM Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Line... best forever wishes... Mick

Eve Roper January 20, 2018 at 7:49 PM Congratulations on your win, Mick! Hugs Eve~`* Mick Talbot January 21, 2018 at 4:14 AM Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Eve... best forever wishes... Mick

Jan Allison January 20, 2018 at 5:32 PM aww so romantic Mick, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Mick Talbot January 21, 2018 at 4:14 AM Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Jan... best forever wishes... Mick

Joseph May January 20, 2018 at 4:35 PM Lovely write...Congrats on your win.. Mick Talbot January 22, 2018 at 3:36 AM Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Joseph... best forever wishes... Mick

Beautiful Scars January 20, 2018 at 11:05 AM great word combo usage, lovely poem...congrats and thank you! :)-luloo Mick Talbot January 20, 2018 at 4:16 PM Wow! Honoured and humbled, many thanks luloo... Hugs... Mick