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A Love To Last a Lifetime

A LOVE TO LAST A LIFETIME ~~~~~ Lucky me, love, a lifetime. My dearest and me together, until the end, love divine, each day so much pleasure. Helps our love to langure. When two becomes so fun, Not one word of anger, Two hearts beating as one. The rapturous pain of love. A gift from One above ~~~~~~~~~~
13th January 2018 Entered in 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme II - Poetry Contest sponsored by Laura Loo

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Date: 1/21/2018 9:13:00 PM
Charming poem, Mick. Congrats on your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 1/22/2018 3:35:00 AM
Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Line... best forever wishes... Mick
Date: 1/20/2018 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mick! Hugs Eve~`*
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Mick Talbot
Date: 1/21/2018 4:14:00 AM
Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Eve... best forever wishes... Mick
Date: 1/20/2018 5:32:00 PM
aww so romantic Mick, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 1/21/2018 4:14:00 AM
Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Jan... best forever wishes... Mick
Date: 1/20/2018 4:35:00 PM
Lovely write...Congrats on your win..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 1/22/2018 3:36:00 AM
Many thanks, a triple honour: 1] To be amongst so many exemplary poets! 2] My first 1st place on Poetry Soup. 3] Being acknowledged. All truly appreciated, thanks again Joseph... best forever wishes... Mick
Date: 1/20/2018 11:05:00 AM
great word combo usage, lovely poem...congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Mick Talbot
Date: 1/20/2018 4:16:00 PM
Wow! Honoured and humbled, many thanks luloo... Hugs... Mick

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