A Love Story

Funny how our story starts is so absurd
We both end the day without any word
Never thought our staring games will go so far
When every night I would only wish upon a star.

Then one day you confessed your love to me
The way you stutter as you say is so funny
And an idea struck and came into me
That fairy tales do happen in reality.

I can still remember when I walked in the aisle
As we eye to eye, I can't hep but smile
Never thought we'd really end up here
After all the fights, after all the tears.

Another chapter in our lives started
I never thought that my dream would happen
Then an angel came into our lives
Oh how blessed I am to be her mother and your wife.

Many years had passed and we became stronger
A lot of problems came but we fixed it all together
We may not be as young as we were once before
But our love will last, that's what I know for sure.

Now I'm eighty-three and you're eighty-eight
Many year had passed but still our love remained so great.


Actually this is the first song I composed. It is the story of my grandparents so 
I dedicate this to them. They are now married and still in love for almost 60 years. I love you lolo and lola!!!

What do you think?
Feel free to
comment!! :)

God Bless!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/23/2014 1:35:00 PM
wonderful tribute to your grandparents i really enjoyed this poem. Hugs Jan xxx
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Sam Tiwana
Date: 7/24/2014 5:36:00 AM
thank you!!! :) God Bless!!!
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