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A Love Poem

In this day and age, it's a rare occurrence To have feelings so deep that it hurts People are absorbed in their own little world A show of love, they sometimes avert There's no greater feeling in this old world Than the feeling of happiness love brings Be they man or woman it makes no difference It's a feeling that makes our hearts sing You can actually go through an entire lifetime And not know this feeling divine The triumph of joy and true happiness It can only be described as sublime It can lift your spirits on the darkest of days And help you through all of life's storms A beacon of light in a dark sky of grey Nothing else creates a feeling so warm

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Date: 2/20/2024 8:22:00 AM
Nicely done, dear Jack. Your poem captures the effervescent feeling that comes from being love and from sharing love. So true, love lifts one's spirits on the darkest of days. Thanks for your lovely words and fabulous rhyme scheme. A true treasure, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/20/2024 8:44:00 AM
Thanks so much dear Sara! Your words feel so warm and loving! This morning was one of those dark days... xx
Date: 2/20/2024 7:42:00 AM
A poem I love, soooo well done Jack!!! I tried to capture loves feeling in a poem called "Under Your Spell"
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/20/2024 7:51:00 AM
And you captured it as well dear friend!!! Love Jack!
Date: 2/20/2024 5:00:00 AM
A great feeling it is too Jack, I'm back from my travels, there's no place like home. Hope you're keeping well Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/20/2024 7:44:00 AM
It was Side (ceeday) in Turkey.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/20/2024 5:06:00 AM
HE'S BACK (again)!!! lol Where this time? Ah home again! Feels good eh! Welcome back Tom!

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