A Love Poem

our eyes meet
we feel bliss heat
pure joy
why then coy
dear twin soul 
love is our goal
shed your fear
do come near
hold my hand
slip on it a band
we both will wear
to show we care
let it be in gold
that till we grow old
we feel
the zing and zeal
of bliss heat
when our eyes meet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 8:54 PM
Beautifully penned, US:)
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Joanna
Sangster - K Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 3:42 PM
A beautiful love poem and enjoyable read for me this evening :-)
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Thank you, Anne
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 1:39 PM
I really like it and how it gets right to the point.
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:57 PM
Yes ~ love for keeps
Narain Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Nice love poem in simple words.
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 5:56 PM
Thanks Jay
M  Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Nice write US….enjoyed! Debx
Seeker Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Thank you dear Deb
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