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A Love Long Forgotten

As I sat on my porch one night Feeling the gentile wind against my face I thought of a love long forgotten Remembering the way he touched my skin As we made love As I sat on my porch one night Looking at the loyal moon I thought of a love long forgotten Remembering how loyal he was To his friends and family As I sat on my porch one night Watching the leaves drift away I thought of a love long forgotten Remembering how he Drifted away from me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 2/7/2009 9:37:00 PM
Very good right. I know the feeling
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Date: 8/28/2008 9:16:00 PM
a beautiful piece of well written poetry enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/27/2008 2:58:00 PM
Hi Sarah - The long forgotten love - Been there done that - great poem honey - God Bless
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Date: 8/25/2008 4:29:00 PM
I suppose everyone had a love at sometime in their lives, that drifted away. Must be meant to be! Perfect picture you portrayed! ....Carrie
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Date: 8/25/2008 4:10:00 PM
Probably happened for the best. Love the style and imagery here. I often have memories of past loves too, and wonder. Love, Shar
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