A Lot of Gray

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'Twas a beautiful and colorful sunrise at first this morn then turned gray..It was such a fast change that it brought these thoughts..Sara

Bright Sun Golden Silhouettes Trees' uplifted arms Shines against sky's gray whispy clouds Seems to paint fluorescent light against clouds at center Contemplating are shapes and a lot of gray what one who is color blind sees most morns

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2012 7:16:00 PM

well, that was the only one of the other type I just saw but here is another form that I really like from you. This one is really nice how you did the color blindness theme. I hope it scores high. The ending is awesome.