A Lost Brother's Wish for a Brother Loss
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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2024 June 30
Image: Kimo
Being the oldest in the family
and surf the waves on top of a
longboard while having them
back in numbers, oh yeah,
never volunteer for NAM, again,
and be sure to kiss mom and
hug my family everyday and
make them proud with my
first of many guitar albums
and increase our family tree
and, remember not to tell
my kid brother to, "get lost."
|"Give me just a little more time"|
|(give me just a little more time)|
|Song by, Chairmen of the Board|
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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