William Kelii Kekaula Poet Verse

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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2024 June 30
Image: Kimo

 

A Lost Brother's Wish for a Brother Loss

Being the oldest in the family
and surf the waves on top of a
longboard while having them
back in numbers, oh yeah,
never volunteer for NAM, again,
and be sure to kiss mom and
hug my family everyday and
make them proud with my
first of many guitar albums
and increase our family tree
and, remember not to tell
my kid brother to, "get lost."

|"Give me just a little more time"|
|(give me just a little more time)|
|Song by, Chairmen of the Board|

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Terry Miller July 1, 2024 at 2:05 AM Lovely poem I'm with Deb, love the last line. William Kelii Kekaula July 1, 2024 at 10:09 AM Mahalo, Terry--he won't say it ... Mom's w/him, tho' kid bro luv to hear it one mo time

Deb M June 30, 2024 at 3:30 PM Love this poem and the photo….is Kimo your little brother? The last line made me smile!! Debx William Kelii Kekaula June 30, 2024 at 3:51 PM Mahalo, Deb. Lol, Hilo Poet is the "get lost" kid, who wish Kimo's wish come true (it's Hawaiian name for James) Aloha William