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A Losers Prayer

I love you GOD But I do not understand When is it that you will let this pain Come to an end! I tried to end it myself But you wouldnt let me Wh the hell do you continue to test me!! Im not strong My body and soul are weak I have nothing Im obsolete Ive failed its over God I tried my best But its done And I do not wish to retest

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Date: 12/4/2009 3:28:00 PM

Interesting, God or no God we do all get tested, but failing is a matter of perpective. Just because something didn't go how we planned or wanted it to doesnt mean we've failed. Its possible to get out of the dark pit it seems you feel your in, get a new perspective and let someone try to help? Good write.

Simone Segal

Date: 12/4/2009 10:32:00 AM

May I say what a pleasure it has been reading all your poetry! you are an amazing person, all you have to do is KNOW IT!!! please if you can read my poems, I write with the greatest Intent! love Simone