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A Loop In the Soup

It’s been a year since I joined the soup, Meanwhile we’ve gone round the sun in a loop, Sadly some fell off, didn’t quite make it all the way, I’m clinging on, hoping to find one better day. But the loop continues, has to persist, Like our thoughts, it’s what makes us exist, So off we go on our journey, around once more, Headlong to tomorrow, unsure what’s in store. Creating poems of all shapes and every kind, Unaware what verse will next spring to mind, Oh boy then it comes, at once all together, A feeling of achievement moments of pleasure. Sometimes I wonder are they already written, Preprogrammed into life, an untapped composition, Latently buried, in the back of our mind, Placed there by creation, or maybe design. So like it or not, as we loop around the soup One thing I’m sure of, this life is no fluke, And that’s us in a nutshell, as we spiral through space, Today seems the same, but earths in a different place. PODIUM PLACING PROMISE(4) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 20 lines 03/01/2020

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Date: 7/15/2020 5:26:00 PM
Happy Anniversary David my mate So glad you joined keep on writting and inspiring
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/17/2020 1:52:00 PM
Well cheers to that
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/16/2020 12:21:00 AM
Cheers Christopher same here I’ll keep going til I drain my brain of every last neuron so probably be empty next week cheers David
Date: 7/15/2020 1:25:00 PM
Hello David Kavanagh, Like this poem. yes earth does seem to be in a different place. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2020 6:01:00 PM
Hello David Kavanagh .Yeur poem. the earth is always moving we do not feel it move.You have a hunch where the earth is moving?! Oh! Enjoy your evening my friend.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/15/2020 2:53:00 PM
Hi Darlene thank you, delighted you enjoyed the poem, we’re constantly on the move through space time, to where I’m not sure, but have a hunch cheers David
Date: 7/15/2020 7:51:00 AM
Oh I love this. Awe are of similar minds my friend. I’m going to fave this piece before it disappears... (or I do) xomo!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/15/2020 8:48:00 PM
...now that’s another “ism” I can is’m.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/15/2020 2:48:00 PM
Had to look that ism up, fits in to my outlook on life along with biocentrism, I believe the universe is infinite past and future and if I’m right it means we’re part of infinity so anything’s possible, it’s a crazy life super Mo cheers David
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/15/2020 12:24:00 PM
Ah, my “we” found “awe” more fitting. Thank you! I recently found an “ism” I can believe in, or rather an “ism” that fits my beliefs and my being here before fits (Panpsychism) ...we must have met before.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/15/2020 9:35:00 AM
Thanks super Mo, your great poems will be your legacy, have an ageless quality to them, you where definitely on this planet before, cheers David
Date: 7/15/2020 6:14:00 AM
Thoughts rolling around in the head. The muse grabbing stitches of our life, some dusted off and compared to today. Speaking of spiraling in space, I’m amused by a new FB messenger effect. Blessings, David!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/15/2020 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Kim your poems have been an influence to me, such positivity is indeed a blessing cheers David

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