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A Look in the Mirror

What's going on here? These large bags under my eyes How long they've been there?

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Date: 3/5/2016 7:52:00 PM
Mine started in my 40's I hate them!!
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 3/6/2016 5:02:00 PM
My wife suggested placing a cucumber under my eyes I'd rather eat them than placing them under my eyes.
Date: 2/27/2016 6:29:00 PM
Nice ! They surely creep up on us. I've been reliably informed that this type of haiku is called a senyru - but it doesn't really matter ! Much enjoyed.
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 2/28/2016 7:35:00 AM
I had it pointed out to me Robert, but being honest it doesn't matter to me ! I wrote my first 4-5-4 the other day, and have written a few haikus too which I will put up here.
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Robert Heemstra
Date: 2/27/2016 9:10:00 PM
I thought so! I'm not sure what the general rule is! I'm just a five-seven-five junkie and I mostly call them Haikus. Thank you Lenny!