A Look In the Mirror

What's going on here?
These large bags under my eyes
How long they've been there?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Mine started in my 40's I hate them!!
Heemstra Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:02 PM
My wife suggested placing a cucumber under my eyes I'd rather eat them than placing them under my eyes.
Gazbowski Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 6:29 PM
Nice ! They surely creep up on us. I've been reliably informed that this type of haiku is called a senyru - but it doesn't really matter ! Much enjoyed.
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February 28, 2016 at 7:35 AM
I had it pointed out to me Robert, but being honest it doesn't matter to me ! I wrote my first 4-5-4 the other day, and have written a few haikus too which I will put up here.
Heemstra Avatar
February 27, 2016 at 9:10 PM
I thought so! I'm not sure what the general rule is! I'm just a five-seven-five junkie and I mostly call them Haikus. Thank you Lenny!
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