Karen Da Poet Rhyme

A Lonely Walk

I walk through a lonely road,
With burdens and heavy loads;
I don’t know where it leads,
Not even certain how the signs would read.
 
Been trekking this harsh, gloomy nights
And only on wishes that I see the light;
In dreams, I pray that the sun will rise,
But I know I still have to pay a price.
 
At times, to hope I dwell,
And if it is real, I can’t even tell.
All I’m sure are fears and pain,
That mess up with my tears and the rain.
 
I’m sick, I’m tired, I want to rest.
Oh, how I wish the birds would share its nest.
And so I’ll stand and walk again;
This time, through happiness that I long to gain.

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The Brince September 11, 2018 at 8:38 AM Love it. Your writings are very similar to mine Karen Da September 12, 2018 at 9:14 AM Thank u. Yeah, you're right as yours are emotions filled just like most of mine..

Arthur Vaso August 6, 2018 at 1:53 AM This is not only a beautiful poem, is a beautiful first poem, I dont usually say this, but if you look at my first poem here, you will see why! Karen Da August 7, 2018 at 8:08 AM Thank u, but yours was great. I noticed we have relevant first poems..

The Brince July 24, 2018 at 1:56 PM I know the feeling all to well Karen Da July 24, 2018 at 10:21 PM Yeah, thank u..

Paul Callus July 6, 2018 at 3:54 PM In this poem you share sadness, pain and longing, Karen. Once the clouds disperse you will see the sun shining again! Regards // paul Karen Da July 6, 2018 at 6:02 PM Yeah, right Paul. Thank u very much..

Downed Jester April 19, 2018 at 10:54 AM This one really speaks to me :) i can definitely relate to this piece Karen Da July 24, 2018 at 10:20 PM Thank u Downed Jester. You do the same. God bless! Downed Jester July 20, 2018 at 9:08 AM Thats exactly how i write! I dont really think about the words, my mood just does it for me! Keep up your awesomeness Karen Da April 20, 2018 at 7:34 AM When I wrote that poem, it was like the emotions were dictating what words to jot down..

Line Gauthier January 17, 2018 at 5:33 AM Beautifully done, Karen. Karen Da January 17, 2018 at 8:43 AM Thank u very much Line. It is such an inspiration..

Arturo Michael January 7, 2018 at 5:28 AM Wow, Karen...You expressed sadness on your walkthrough loneliness and despair... Well, written in your poem...All the best to you Karen Da January 7, 2018 at 10:02 AM Thank u very much. That inspires me more. I wish u likewise. God bless!:-)