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A Lonely Walk

I walk through a lonely road, With burdens and heavy loads; I don’t know where it leads, Not even certain how the signs would read. Been trekking this harsh, gloomy nights And only on wishes that I see the light; In dreams, I pray that the sun will rise, But I know I still have to pay a price. At times, to hope I dwell, And if it is real, I can’t even tell. All I’m sure are fears and pain, That mess up with my tears and the rain. I’m sick, I’m tired, I want to rest. Oh, how I wish the birds would share its nest. And so I’ll stand and walk again; This time, through happiness that I long to gain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/11/2018 8:38:00 AM
Love it. Your writings are very similar to mine
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Karen Da
Date: 9/12/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank u. Yeah, you're right as yours are emotions filled just like most of mine..
Date: 8/6/2018 1:53:00 AM
This is not only a beautiful poem, is a beautiful first poem, I dont usually say this, but if you look at my first poem here, you will see why!
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Karen Da
Date: 8/7/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thank u, but yours was great. I noticed we have relevant first poems..
Date: 7/24/2018 1:56:00 PM
I know the feeling all to well
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Karen Da
Date: 7/24/2018 10:21:00 PM
Yeah, thank u..
Date: 7/6/2018 3:54:00 PM
In this poem you share sadness, pain and longing, Karen. Once the clouds disperse you will see the sun shining again! Regards // paul
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Karen Da
Date: 7/6/2018 6:02:00 PM
Yeah, right Paul. Thank u very much..
Date: 4/19/2018 10:54:00 AM
This one really speaks to me :) i can definitely relate to this piece
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Karen Da
Date: 7/24/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thank u Downed Jester. You do the same. God bless!
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Downed Jester
Date: 7/20/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thats exactly how i write! I dont really think about the words, my mood just does it for me! Keep up your awesomeness
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Karen Da
Date: 4/20/2018 7:34:00 AM
When I wrote that poem, it was like the emotions were dictating what words to jot down..
Date: 1/17/2018 5:33:00 AM
Beautifully done, Karen.
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Karen Da
Date: 1/17/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank u very much Line. It is such an inspiration..
Date: 1/7/2018 5:28:00 AM
Wow, Karen...You expressed sadness on your walkthrough loneliness and despair... Well, written in your poem...All the best to you
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Karen Da
Date: 1/7/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thank u very much. That inspires me more. I wish u likewise. God bless!:-)

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