A Lonely Walk

a lonely walk while
shoulders brush on crowded streets
get out of my way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Taormina Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Long time since I've read your work. Reminds me of Long Beach (lol)
Mason Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:50 PM
Thats surely how one feels in big crowded cities ... I'd never make it in N.Y. ... I smile too much ... LOL ... been awhile since you've posted here at PoetrySoup. Hope you come back soon especially since your work is featured this week!! Great stuff!!
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