A Lonely Star Shone One Night

A lonely star shone one night;
By a grave, he stood all alone in white.
The muffled sounds of a laughter gone so soon blew near
With whistles of a heart’s solemnest thoughts,
And, thus, he discovered that
He was not alone:
A lonely star shone one night!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
September 11, 2024 at 11:33 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 3:51 PM
Rajkumar Panthoiren, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 27, 2015 at 3:43 PM
R P, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 8:25 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Rajkumar. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2012 at 1:16 AM
Thank you, Carol. Your words really lift me up! Always wishing the best for you...
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May 31, 2012 at 11:47 PM
NIIIIICE! Verily enjoyed!
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June 3, 2012 at 1:17 AM
Thank you...
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