A Lonely Soul

Lonely soul floating by
 Stole my heart and run away
 Drifting fast a shadow away
 Why did you pass anyway.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cayton Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 10:27 AM
nice verse though sad. God Bless, Lucinda aka Cindy Lu
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:17 AM
Thank you Cindy...Xx
Thompson Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM
Sad but beautiful, thank you for sharing Dawn :) Taylor
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:16 AM
Thank you Taylor xx
Falotico Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 6:17 AM
Very heartfelt Dawn. Michael
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:15 AM
Thank you Michael x
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Sad, a lonely soul Dawn, but very well written. - oxox Anne-Lise
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 1, 2012 at 4:15 AM
Thank you for reading Anne x x
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