A Little Seasoning

Now Summer slumbers
As Fall takes her rightful place
And Winter awakes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Good afternoon Larry. The weekend and half this week are gone and this is the first I have had a chance to read. Had so much drama in my life. Really feeling good reading poetry today. Glad yours was among them. Love, Carol
Buggs Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Great senryu.Beautiful image.It seems like each senryu you write they get better and better
Taylor Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:21 AM
Thanks for your comment. In answer to the MIL question - maybe if you have her committed? Might work! Worth a shot! Ralph
Taylor Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Very descriptive, my friend. Great senryu. Ralph
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