Cecilia Macfarlane Poet Rhyme

A Little More Time

Guardians Angels from up above, please 
Surround my sister with bountiful love
Calm her mind, help soothe her pain
Slow the cancer running in her veins

Diagnosed only 6 months ago 
Filling us all with a overwhelming fear
We know your waiting with open arms
As her final days are all too near

We're not ready to let her go
Give us a just little more time
To shower her with all of love
Before she makes heavens climb

 We loss our mom almost a year ago, now my sister is going to join her.
 Marina is 54

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James Marshall Goff August 2, 2018 at 11:25 AM I'm sorry to hear of your Sister's passing Cecilia...tho I don't know you, I understand your grief, and I have lost dear family members also...I know they look out for us as we try to make them proud of our life ongoing, and we call upon them for strength in our struggles...God Bless and hold you, james Cecilia Macfarlane November 19, 2019 at 11:06 AM Thank you for such a touching message. Big hug to you.

Faraz Ajmal June 27, 2018 at 11:17 AM It s really sad to know about your sister, I know about cancer and believe me the person in it is in immense pain, hat life is nothing, every night the fear of death, every second,death coming more closer and especially after Chemo, the person is finish, deah may sound cruel but in cancer, it atleast gives the person peace, now I am sure that your sister shall be in heavens, sitting with your mother, free from every pain, every fear, good luck and have a nice day Cecilia Macfarlane June 27, 2018 at 11:36 AM Yes, no more suffering. My sister and mother are my guardian angels : )

John Gondolf June 16, 2018 at 9:27 AM Cecilia, I'm so sorry to hear of your loses. It is always hard when we lose someone who has been such a big part of our lives. My thoughts are with you as I wish you all the best. John Cecilia Macfarlane June 27, 2018 at 11:34 AM Thank you John, all the best to you as well. Hugs

James Inman April 14, 2018 at 8:55 AM Cecilia, a sad lovely poem. Cecilia Macfarlane April 15, 2018 at 10:21 AM Thank you James, she passed away and is forever in my heart.

Duke Beaufort March 5, 2018 at 5:41 AM Cecilia, I will be thinking of you today and the weeks ahead, just taking time to try to understand what you are dealing with. There is no peace to offer or kind thing to say that can ease this tragedy. You wrote a beautiful poem, and your sister is fortunate to have a loving family. I am sorry for what is happening. Cecilia Macfarlane April 15, 2018 at 10:01 AM Thank you Duke. My sister passed away on March 3, 17 days after I sent up this prayer asking for a little more time, which we were granted and I will be forever grateful for. She followed by mom one year and one day later. They are now my guardian angels looking out for me. I miss them both terribly but they remain in my heart forever.

Caren Krutsinger February 28, 2018 at 7:29 AM you have written a heartfelt poem that tugs at my heart strings; you and your sister have prayers from Kansas. Cecilia Macfarlane April 15, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you Carencro, she passed away peacefully and is with my mom now.

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2018 at 6:13 PM I am very very sorry to hear this , dear. Soupmail. Cecilia Macfarlane February 27, 2018 at 8:46 PM Thank you Andrea. My heart is breaking. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2018 at 3:04 PM - This was terribly sad, Cecilia - A deep sorrow in your heart - May the angels take care of them - R.I.P. WITH LOVE - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Cecilia Macfarlane February 27, 2018 at 4:01 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. We believe she holding on to Friday March 2nd, the anniversary of our moms death a year ago. Hugs

Lewis Raynes February 18, 2018 at 8:51 PM this is so sad Cecilia, i also watched my father die from cancer...it was so hard. i wish your sister all the peace in the world during her final days . hugs from Australia Cecilia Macfarlane February 27, 2018 at 1:34 PM Thank you for your kind wish Lewis. This has been the hardest thing I've been through.

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 2:55 PM This is heartbreaking, to lose anyone is so difficult, but to watch them die, helplessly is so hard and breaks the heart... I hope her last moments are peaceful and you can spend some time with her.. Your sister is in my prayers.. Cecilia Macfarlane February 27, 2018 at 1:53 PM Thank you Silent One, it is so difficult watching her decline day by day. I have been staying on the hospice, when I go home I fall apart, so staying here until......Hugs

Tom Cunningham February 14, 2018 at 1:08 PM So sorry to hear about your sister Cecilia. I too have lost relatives' to this killer. A beautiful verse you have done. I shall say a prayer for you and your family. Regards Tom Cecilia Macfarlane February 27, 2018 at 2:34 PM Thank you Tom. After writing this verse my prayer was answered. We have been granted time and her pain is being managed. I'm sorry for your losses. Hugs