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A Little Moon For Benjamin

A little moon for Benjamin For Benjamin the moon Which casts itself upon his face Tonight when it is full In a magic transformation That illuminates, in depth A purer form of innocence A finer state of grace And wisdom’s inspiration That poets can embrace For here the gaze of wonder! For here the look of awe! For here the eyes enraptured By what they see afar And uttering but these few words In a simple, boundless phrase “The moon, the moon”, in rapt exclaim Is all he needs to say – For nothing brighter shines tonight Than the moon that shines beyond Except the eyes of Benjamin For whom the moon belongs –

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Date: 6/28/2023 7:57:00 AM
Truly a magical write, John. You've got 'the touch,' methinks. Have you published any of your poems? The world deserves a chance to revel in their beauty. (I'm serious, by the way. They are superb.) Huzzah! ~ Gershon
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John Oldham
Date: 6/29/2023 11:00:00 AM
Wow, Gershon, thanks for the vote of confidence! Glad you enjoy my poems and rate them so highly. I find publishing here on PS to my satisfaction. Warm Regards, John
Date: 6/26/2023 3:53:00 PM
Wow John…..l found this poem really beautiful and very touching! Love it….Debx
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John Oldham
Date: 6/27/2023 4:15:00 PM
Thank You, Deb. Appreciate it! Best, John
Date: 6/23/2023 3:21:00 PM
Just simply beautiful work!
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John Oldham
Date: 6/25/2023 2:14:00 PM
Thanks again, Paige. Appreciate you. :) Best, John
Date: 6/17/2023 7:00:00 PM
What a lovely poem, it reads effortlessly. Your last verse couldn’t have been better. My FAV list continues to grow. John
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John Oldham
Date: 6/18/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thanks, J! And I’ve just found another fellow poet to follow. :) Best, John

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