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A Little Crazy

My poetry is normally thought provoking that its insane Word rhyming that can rip up the direct thought line in the brain Words so hard they concrete steel bars locking on the mind with chains Words bleeding that they mentally leave thought with stains Writing my life away before I die in a world with no change I take *****in poetry so serious its my only range of life written about our past experienced death pains We all going to die someday in someway so we best look for someway in this some kind of day before you lay your head down as you pray past this darkness looking at the sky gray so please Lord help me do something the people can face with the uttermost respect regardless of gender sex or race because someday we all going to go A Little Crazy in this crazy place.......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/18/2012 12:45:00 PM
This poem could be turned into a rap song! I just imagined Eminem rapping those words! so expressive! Have a good week end, Omneya
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Travis Lone Hill
Date: 10/24/2012 9:23:00 AM
thanx Ive been writing for some odd years now off and on....now or more I am writing everyday and sometimnes everymoment I get........thanks for your comment

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