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"a Little Closer"

I love when your close

               when our eyes only see us

                               and air can't find room..

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 8:14 PM

on the 5th day of x-mass my true love gave to me.. 5 moments of you and me....4 kissing songs.. 3 old pens.. 2 cradles of love ... and a warm place in his arms and fair tree....

Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2010 at 8:40 PM

wow, what a senryu!!

Sara Kendrick

October 27, 2010 at 6:07 AM

Great passionate work..Sara

Iolanda Scripca

October 26, 2010 at 9:43 PM

Your Senryu is breathtaking as "air can't find room" Just lovely, dear friend.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

October 26, 2010 at 2:24 PM

I see your tongue is aquainted with the sweetness of love too my friend. Love the poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 26, 2010 at 11:28 AM

May your week be one of good health, may your heart be full of love, and your life give you amazing inspiration for your writing. I enjoyed reading your exceptional poetry and thank you for sharing it Michael. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

October 26, 2010 at 10:57 AM

That would be a good thing I reckon, the song breathless comes to mind. Enjoyed your senryu Michael ;) lve W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 26, 2010 at 6:58 AM

Oh that closeness is super important and super cool and romantic .. lovely lines so intense and passionate my White Knight.. and WOW what a Monday night game ... those Giants are so awesome but I fear the Cowboys season is now over for good and will be in last place for the rest giving the Eagles a chance to climb.. yuck.. enjoyed today with luv.. Jersey Girl rocks forever .. wearing her team jersey with pride today..luv.