Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

A Little Burro - Nursery Rhyme

I had a little burro
  I made it out of clay

And when I put its teeth in
  My burro, it could bray

Hee-haw  hee-haw  hee-haw
  My burro, it would say

Honkity  honk-honk  honk-honk
  When a goose got in its way




        March 08, 2021
Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest
      Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Sara Kendrick March 18, 2021 at 10:28 AM Ha!! Ha!! I would like to meet that little burro. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Vasco Ludovice March 14, 2021 at 8:17 AM Very nice one! Really like the way you structure your poems and the way you visualize and write these theme's Gershon Wolf March 14, 2021 at 8:27 AM Vasco, you are hereby hired as my PR man! How much do you charge for the superlatives, by the way? lol. Thank you so much for all your supportive comments and the encouragement! Peace, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2021 at 4:03 AM - Adorable and fun nursery poem, Gershon :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar March 12, 2021 at 3:39 AM What a cute nursery rhyme Gershon. Loved it..Congrats on your win... God bless.. ~ Ani

Eve Roper March 11, 2021 at 8:56 PM Gershon, this is so cute and very creative nursery rhyme, with rhythm and flow. Congratulations on your win. hugs Eve

Eric Cohen March 11, 2021 at 6:47 PM Good stuff, Gershon. I thought of a dreidel at first from the rhythm scheme. Very catchy, I keep reading it over in my head. Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 7:01 PM Hey, Eric. You are so right. The rhythm is modeled after the old dreidel song. Thanks! ~ Gumby and Pokey

Line Gauthier March 11, 2021 at 5:51 PM lol ~ how cute, Gershon. You're a pro at these ~ Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 7:00 PM Wow. Thank you for the encouragement, Line. Never been called a 'pro' at anything before. Appreciated!! :) gw

Terry Flood March 11, 2021 at 3:05 PM Is there something in your Gin, Gershon? If so, might I have a swig. ;-) congrats on you're win with this fun write. Terry Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:34 PM I thought there was rum in my gun, but it turned into rummy in my tummy. Cheers, Terry. :)

Alexis Y. March 11, 2021 at 2:14 PM Hi Gershon, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:31 PM Alexis, always happy to see a word or three from you. Take good care, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2021 at 12:53 PM Congratulations on your win. So Very Fun/Cute. Have a blessed day............... Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:29 PM Thanks, Paula. And congrats to you too on your winning write in the contest. Cheers, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues March 9, 2021 at 6:21 PM So cute!

Lindsay Laurie March 9, 2021 at 3:37 PM Hello Gershon … adorable text poem for children. A very good modern nursery rhyme Gershon - Lindsay Gershon Wolf March 9, 2021 at 5:31 PM Appreciate the support, Lindsay! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger March 9, 2021 at 9:48 AM I shall now be able to call you Father Goose! Gershon Wolf March 9, 2021 at 5:31 PM Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! 'Father Goose' it is! Take care, Mother.

Judy Ball March 9, 2021 at 7:30 AM Perfect for a children's book. Love it. God Bless, JB Gershon Wolf March 9, 2021 at 5:21 PM Thank you for the affirmation, Judy. Appreciated. Take good care, Gershon

Unseeking Seeker March 8, 2021 at 7:43 PM Hahaha! Childhood relived! :) Gershon Wolf March 9, 2021 at 5:16 PM Ha, ha! Who's reliving it?! I'm just out of diapers myself. lol. Thanks, Seeker

Alexis Y. March 8, 2021 at 6:24 PM Hi Gershon, You've penned a good “ nursery rhyme” poem for the contest. It is so fitting for the age group. Best wishes in the contest. I enjoyed the read:-)Alexis Gershon Wolf March 8, 2021 at 6:30 PM Thank you so much, Alexis. I think that it's age-appropriate because I was five last year, and I still remember a lot of stuff. lol. Cheers, Alexis!

Jan Allison March 8, 2021 at 5:54 PM great fun GW:-) hugs Jan xx Gershon Wolf March 8, 2021 at 6:23 PM Glad you like it, Jan! ~ Hee-haw