- a Little Bit of Heaven -

Such a romantic place on a beach in Monte Carlo 
Simple little things in life catching one's breath 

Moonlight glinting of waves breaking off a white sandy beach 
Faraway thoughts brown eyes crying in an ocean dream song 

Spell of romance makes one forget the sense of anything 
Silent whispers echoes binding our chain together tides speak 

Do you remember the white doves that followed us along the beaches 
Each link in your arm magic walks closer feelings sing inside a joyous choir enchants

Nature nurtured by the desire to fulfill dreams makes time stop 
Holds deep sea emotions a galloping white steed races home in warm waves kiss 

The natures mesmerizing perfume of fragrant flowers 
Where destiny paints the joy in butterflies dance on a warm loving breeze 

Such is the passion in the depths of ones soul 
Jewels needle vision flies without wings heaven sings in a spiral coloring rainbows 

No barriers closed no reasons withstand 
The midnight moon shades blue embraced one shadow two become one dream 

A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
February 6, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Kudos to you both. What wonderful collaborative harmony displayed in this awesome, romantic piece! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Pandita.
Eaton Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 8:06 PM
So beautifully written Iiam and Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 6:57 AM
- Where does our next journey go :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:23 PM
yet another classic romantic write from two awesome pens - great write Anne lise and Liam:-) a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Hello Liam and Anne Lise! Very romantic and dreamy pens, my dearest friends Liam and Anne Lise! Very nice! A huge 7 +++ for each! Yes, Monaco is a nice destination to fly to any day.Enjoy!A very sweet poem filled of love promises dreams and hopes to be held very close to ones heart.smiling. This one spills romance,the sweetness of love all over.This is a little bit of heaven, no doubt! Love it! The perfect getaway!Very beautiful golden pens! Have a lovely weekend! God bless you both always! :) Love and hugs!xoxxox D.^O^
Dunn Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Dear Liam, a great work here a fine collaboration between two excellent poets, and thanks for your comment also, glad I stopped by tonight and you have a great evening, cheri
Nance Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:25 PM
A stunning collaboration from two beautiful poets. Awesome :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Ahh!! Way to go with a collaboration..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work...Sara
Mcdonnell  Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Nice
Mcdaid Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 6:22 PM
thank you karl for the beautiful comment
Smith Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 6:55 AM
Okay you two now I'm itching to go to Monte Carlo... Only seen it in the movies....sounds wonderful
Mcdaid Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 6:21 PM
smiling tim i only seen it in the movies myself anne lise her pen drew the beauty pal thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you
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