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A Little Bird

A noisy little bird was singing his song Outside my window; early morning light Maybe he was singing his song to attract a mate Or simply singing his song to express his delight He sang so sweetly; he sang so loud; sang so long I would have enjoy it more; if sung in the bright sunlight I might even have sung along; if only I could carry a tune Or if I had gotten a bit more sleep last night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/3/2015 9:15:00 AM
I can not carry a tune in a bucket but dearly love to hear birds sing. I love mockingbirds, my dad loved them above all others.. Great write, very solid 7 my friend.
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Date: 12/15/2013 2:51:00 AM
You must have a beautiful spirit if the bird wants to serenade you...lol
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Date: 12/15/2013 2:49:00 AM
Really sweetly honest ..I like this. Thank you also for taking the time to comment on my poem" La La Land ".. No the the government will not help people and have really become the problem instead. ..
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Date: 10/29/2013 7:22:00 AM
very nice ending, made me smile
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Date: 9/16/2012 10:08:00 PM
To make you happy, it would be a delight To sing for you all through the night! Lol... Loved it! Just kidding...
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Date: 9/16/2012 10:06:00 PM
To make you happy, it would be a delight To sing for you all through the night! Lol... Loved it! Just kidding...
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:46:00 PM
Birds are my favorite creatures. :)
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:45:00 PM
ahhhh. daylight. Good to the heart :)
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Date: 8/10/2012 8:54:00 AM
Comical rhyme, Donald...a moment of contemplation is a delightful poem! gwendolen
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:37:00 PM
i want to sing along to, but like you i also can't carry a tune. so i just listen to the day begin the way the birds do it. peace, & thanks for your coment.
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Date: 8/1/2012 4:19:00 PM
So cute, Donald. I have one that is about a bird singing outside my window and how much I hated it (actually I usually love such birds!)
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:35:00 PM
Nice poem ... Terry
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Date: 7/31/2012 10:40:00 AM
Like it Donald...sing along with your little friend, and sleep later. - Have a NICE DAY. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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