a light moment on Shivaratri

puffs of ganja,
intoxicated returned home.
sandals mismatched.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 10:06 PM
Haha great final line
May Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 5:54 PM
The thc at work, Nicely penned
Singh Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:39 AM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:41 AM
- A "light moment" of a big party, Akham :))) - hugs
Singh Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 10:04 PM
Thank you
Rolland Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:48 PM
quite inspiring, take care poet, wonrdeful poem inspiring me
Singh Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 3:06 AM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 2:09 AM
Cannabis can be deadly and leave the user without proper direction.
Singh Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 6:00 AM
Thank you
Blown Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 7:27 AM
wowza man......something just went by... and.....t'was a thought with wings : ) good write.......len
Singh Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 6:00 AM
Thank you
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