A Lifetime Together

You are the tea leaves, I am the tea pot,
I the tiny snowflakes, and you the snow,
Hand in hand we traverse a lifetime together--
Granting your half, you make me whole.

You are the smile on face of my happiness,
I am the shadow guarding your footsteps
Firmly in lock steps of today and tomorrow
Cherishing the yore and future of evermore.

I am the rose bush, you’re pink blossoms,
You the scent of flowers in my spring garden;
In quest of my life, you’re the only reason,
Flame of my soul, you light-up my seasons.

Together we paint our ebullient daybreak--
I the brushstrokes, you the magic wand;
You are the golden rays glistening dew drops,
I the voice of dawn, you the birdsongs.

In my concert hall you’re the orchestra,
You are the piano-music set to our life song.
I’m just the guitar strings, you the gifted artist,
Lyrics of love you are, in my romantic ballad.

On avenue of life, you’re my road signs,
You’re my compass when I’m feeling lost;
You are the lighthouse guiding in dark
On my dreary nights you are the bright star.

March 10, 2020
Placed 1st: Poetic lines from a poetry soup poet—Maria Williams
“You are the tea leaves I am the tea pot
I the tiny snowflakes and you the snow”
From Ode to Mum by Maria Williams
Placed 1st: Strand choice Q poetry contest by Brian Stand
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Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:31 PM
This poem gives such a soothing feeling that one reading is not enough! Beautifully written :)
Kiser Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 9:47 PM
Beautiful piece, congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Yesss, a first place. Congratulations, Vijay
Pandit Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Marc Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Excellent ~ congratulations on your win!
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 6:20 AM
Thank you PM--much appreciate.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Hello Vijay Pandit, this poem is beautiful I like the last verse the best.You are the lighthouse guarding the dark. I like this line. Be well and be safe, be well. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 6:05 PM
Hello Vijay i wish you the best. Stay safe and be strong. Stay well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 3:50 PM
Many thanks Darlene--much appreciate. Stay safe my friend.
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 12:21 PM
I loved this from beginning to end. Here you tell your loved one she is the thing that makes you whole. Beautiful. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Much appreciate, Judy--many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was filled with an amazing poem. Enjoy your win and day........
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 11:03 PM
Vijay, great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 2:54 PM
- No surprise, Vijay :) - Congratulations on your top win :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 4:58 PM
That is so kind of you--many thanks, Anne-Lise.
One Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 5:38 AM
I loved the fifth stanza to this, i can see how the lines truly inspired you to write a brilliant poem.. This poem can be seen as a dedication to a mum and also a romantic one to the one you love... Congratulations on you first place in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Much appreciate SO--many many thanks. Thank you also for holding contests.
There Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 2:08 AM
This is gorgeous, Vijay. You the canvas and your cherished one the color, adding beauty, light and love to your world, as you have added to ours with your intricate and tender write. Lovely ~ a fave for me :)
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2020 at 6:03 AM
So glad to read your comments again--much appreciate my friend--many thanks for your kind remarks, HT. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Adams Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 3:02 PM
wow... this is an excellent write Vijay... you took that line and really went with it, your words fit perfectly... I am sure this will top the winner's list... well done my friend... hugs
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Glad to see you back--much appreciate Sandy--many thanks my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Waiting for THIS one to be judged. I fully expect this to be a top winner.
Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 7:10 AM
That is very kind of you, Andrea--much appreciate--many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 1:54 PM
- No one could say it more beautiful than this, Vijay - Love it :) - Guaranteed a winning poem .... wooooW ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 5:10 PM
So nice to hear and so kind of you, Anne-Lise--much appreciate--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 8:05 PM
A superb piece consisting of vivid metaphors and romantic parallels throughout, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
March 13, 2020 at 6:44 AM
So very kind of you Janice--much appreciate--many thanks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:03 PM
Wow Vijay, it doesn't get more romantic than this poem expressing your ebullient love! I hope to see this a top winner my friend! : ) xxoo
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:54 PM
So very kind of you my friend---much appreciate--many thanks.
May Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 9:19 AM
A beautiful romantic write Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:53 PM
Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 5:30 PM
you were very wonderfully inspired to write an amazing poem here, Vijay. I too chose this theme but mine is much shorter than yours! I think it was the best phrase of the ones we were to choose from.
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Yes indeed, the prompt was really good. Much appreciate your kind feedback my friend--many thanks, Andrea.
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 3:24 PM
Great work Vijay incorporating Marias lines and theme, well done, sure to place well Vijay, best wishes...
Pandit Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Much appreciate Charlie--many thanks for your kind remarks.
Dalei Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Excellent poetry. Very rich concept, well fabrication and brilliant presentation. 7 out of 7 from me........ hugs //Manmath//
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 11:19 AM
Much appreciate Manmath--many thanks for the kind remarks.
Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 12:35 AM
A fave.. You took those beautiful lines of Maria Williams and enchant it with your magical pen.. Some of the lines are glittering like jewels in gold.. Granting your half, you make me whole...I am the shadow guarding your footsteps...I’m just the guitar strings, you the gifted artist,...Wonderful..
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:05 AM
You are so very kind, Jenish--so glad you like some of the lines---much appreciate..many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Nicole Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 10:30 PM
Oh my!! This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. Your thoughts wrap softly around me, like a tender melody. Inspired by a wonderful poetess, you have been. I wish to place this in my favorites. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:04 AM
So happy to read your comments, Brandy..much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Proxenos Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Hi Vijay, I LOVE this poem, Maria might have inspired you with her beautiful words but you wrote a gem fantastic my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 4:22 PM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your kind feedback--many thanks, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:07 AM
Beautiful and romantic, Vijay. You have been well inspired, my friend. I can imagine this love lasting beyond a lifetime! Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:46 AM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate, as always. Regards.
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:00 AM
You were well inspired by Maria's lines Vijay, a very romantic verse. Tom
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Yes--it's a catchy line that can take you many places. Much appreciate Tom--many thanks.
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