A Life So Young

A life that touched so any hearts. Now so tragicaly it departs. From up above she hears us cry. And wishes that our tears would dry. She wants us to all be strong She wants to know that nothings wrong. Forever in our hears she'll be In the hearts of you and me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 17, 2026 at 12:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 26, 2016 at 9:31 PM
ashley becker, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA**
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August 10, 2015 at 6:55 PM
ASHLEY, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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