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A Life Saving Whisper

dry leaves rustle to stealthily hint the presence of venomous snake July-20-2021 For the contest whispers by John Lawless

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2021 10:59:00 AM

Whoa!! I would not want to visit in this place. It is amazing how the leaves can camouflage a dangerous animal or reptile. Thanks for your visit to my page. This one reads like a good contender for John's contest. Sara

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/29/2021 6:21:00 AM

Your Haiku beautifully captures the scene, yes the rustle of leaves seem to whisper caution, best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/21/2021 12:05:00 PM

Few words with much said. Yes, watch out for the snakes in leaves. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/20/2021 5:35:00 AM

The moment beautifully captured, Supraja. Best for a win.

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/20/2021 7:00:00 AM

Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/20/2021 3:37:00 AM

Those who live in wild areas, where snakes abound, must be careful to escape death. Hugs.

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/20/2021 7:00:00 AM

So true... Thanks for stopping by...

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/20/2021 2:40:00 AM

Amazing! Very creative! I see a winner in this. All the best for contest

Supraja Kannan
Date: 7/20/2021 6:59:00 AM

Thank you so much, Rama...