A Life Saving Whisper

dry leaves rustle to
stealthily hint the presence
of venomous snake

July-20-2021


For the contest whispers by John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Whoa!! I would not want to visit in this place. It is amazing how the leaves can camouflage a dangerous animal or reptile. Thanks for your visit to my page. This one reads like a good contender for John's contest. Sara
Pathak Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Your Haiku beautifully captures the scene, yes the rustle of leaves seem to whisper caution, best wishes for the contest
Pandit Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 5:35 AM
The moment beautifully captured, Supraja. Best for a win.
Kannan Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 7:00 AM
Thank you so much... Glad you liked it...
Buhagiar Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:37 AM
Those who live in wild areas, where snakes abound, must be careful to escape death. Hugs.
Kannan Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 7:00 AM
So true... Thanks for stopping by...
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 2:40 AM
Amazing! Very creative! I see a winner in this. All the best for contest
Kannan Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Thank you so much, Rama...
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