A Life Saving Whim

We are going to Corfu, what a great thing,
Come on its booked, let’s go and buy everything.

‘Hang on,’ say’s hubby, 'In Corfu it rains a lot'.
'I want more sun, not the rain, we have already got.'

But it’s booked we are ready one week to go,
‘I want to change it’ he says, 'so to Rhodes we will go.’

At that time we didn’t know what a crossroads that was, 
Instead of Corfu, we changed it because,

My husband and I wanted more sun than the rain
That was the point in changing our plane.

Ok, we are at the airport, now watching and waiting
The flight we were booked on was just to the runway taking.

It stopped all of a sudden and smoke did appear,
The poor people on board, they could not get out of her.

We had changed our holiday on a whim because of rain
Fifty Four people died in front of us on that plane.

The plane we had booked but had changed at the end
Took all of those lives but our prayers we did send.

The crossroads had appeared we were lucky that day
We had changed our course and our lives that we can say.

But to the families of those that perished back then
We have never forgotten and ours prayers still go out for them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/19/2012 11:27:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I feel so sad for those on the plane but i'm glad YOU both changed YOUR mind LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 9/27/2012 8:53:00 AM
this is so poignant Mandy, it had to be, so your future be safe, so much, we all here on soup can enjoy what you write today........
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Date: 11/28/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "CrossRoads of your Life" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/25/2011 9:14:00 PM
Congrats Many on a marvelous win luv.. excellent poetry ...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/26/2011 3:22:00 AM
Thanks x
Date: 11/17/2011 4:56:00 AM
Yikes!
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Date: 11/17/2011 4:43:00 AM
wow, i literally got chills reading this...beautifully poignant
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/17/2011 4:46:00 AM
Thanks I wasn't sure wether to post it as it may be considered bad taste even though it is true, But i wil pull it if it upsets anyone.x
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