A Life Saving Whim

We are going to Corfu, what a great thing,
Come on its booked, let’s go and buy everything.

‘Hang on,’ say’s hubby, 'In Corfu it rains a lot'.
'I want more sun, not the rain, we have already got.'

But it’s booked we are ready one week to go,
‘I want to change it’ he says, 'so to Rhodes we will go.’

At that time we didn’t know what a crossroads that was, 
Instead of Corfu, we changed it because,

My husband and I wanted more sun than the rain
That was the point in changing our plane.

Ok, we are at the airport, now watching and waiting
The flight we were booked on was just to the runway taking.

It stopped all of a sudden and smoke did appear,
The poor people on board, they could not get out of her.

We had changed our holiday on a whim because of rain
Fifty Four people died in front of us on that plane.

The plane we had booked but had changed at the end
Took all of those lives but our prayers we did send.

The crossroads had appeared we were lucky that day
We had changed our course and our lives that we can say.

But to the families of those that perished back then
We have never forgotten and ours prayers still go out for them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 19, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I feel so sad for those on the plane but i'm glad YOU both changed YOUR mind LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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September 27, 2012 at 8:53 AM
this is so poignant Mandy, it had to be, so your future be safe, so much, we all here on soup can enjoy what you write today........
Brown Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "CrossRoads of your Life" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Congrats Many on a marvelous win luv.. excellent poetry ...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 3:22 AM
Thanks x
Lane Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Yikes!
Elliott Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 4:43 AM
wow, i literally got chills reading this...beautifully poignant
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 4:46 AM
Thanks I wasn't sure wether to post it as it may be considered bad taste even though it is true, But i wil pull it if it upsets anyone.x
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