A Life Process

pale washed out tired.. empty vibrancy departed, so uneasy traumatised: energy d w i n d l e s ....age takes its toll

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Date: 12/9/2017 8:54:00 AM

There's a chapter in my school course named 'life processes'. I can relate your poem to that. Nice work.

Brian Strand
Date: 12/9/2017 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Harshita

Date: 11/1/2017 1:59:00 PM

Yes, it does! But we keep fighting back!

Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 4:10:00 PM

Yes indeed Kim

Date: 11/1/2017 9:11:00 AM

I should be too young to appreciate this as much as I do :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2017 9:54:00 AM

I wholeheartedly agree.

Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 9:33:00 AM

It's just in the mind Maureen.

Date: 11/1/2017 8:31:00 AM

I totally agree, Brian, but making best of it and still finding plenty of good things left! I enjoyed!!

Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Mike