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A Life Process

pale washed out tired.. empty vibrancy departed, so uneasy traumatised: energy d w i n d l e s ....age takes its toll

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/9/2017 8:54:00 AM
There's a chapter in my school course named 'life processes'. I can relate your poem to that. Nice work.
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/9/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Harshita
Date: 11/1/2017 1:59:00 PM
Yes, it does! But we keep fighting back!
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 4:10:00 PM
Yes indeed Kim
Date: 11/1/2017 9:11:00 AM
I should be too young to appreciate this as much as I do :)
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/1/2017 9:54:00 AM
I wholeheartedly agree.
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 9:33:00 AM
It's just in the mind Maureen.
Date: 11/1/2017 8:31:00 AM
I totally agree, Brian, but making best of it and still finding plenty of good things left! I enjoyed!!
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Mike

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