Brian Strand Poet Verse

A Life Process

pale
washed out
tired..
empty
      vibrancy
departed,
         so uneasy
traumatised:
energy
     d
       w
         i
          n
           d
            l 
             e
              s
....age
takes its toll

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Harshita Chaudhary December 9, 2017 at 8:54 AM There's a chapter in my school course named 'life processes'. I can relate your poem to that. Nice work. Brian Strand December 9, 2017 at 9:48 AM Thanks Harshita

Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2017 at 1:59 PM Yes, it does! But we keep fighting back! Brian Strand November 1, 2017 at 4:10 PM Yes indeed Kim

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 1, 2017 at 9:11 AM I should be too young to appreciate this as much as I do :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 1, 2017 at 9:54 AM I wholeheartedly agree. Brian Strand November 1, 2017 at 9:33 AM It's just in the mind Maureen.

Mike Gentile November 1, 2017 at 8:31 AM I totally agree, Brian, but making best of it and still finding plenty of good things left! I enjoyed!! Brian Strand November 1, 2017 at 8:40 AM Thanks Mike