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A Life Lesson

I did not make the color-guard team again, a life lesson of loss. 9/7/2020 Contest: My Most Unforgettable Moment in High School Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Date: 9/29/2020 4:04:00 AM
Creative line for the contest. Reads like a good contender. Sara
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Date: 9/11/2020 2:11:00 AM
One must learn to take th smooth with the rough. Congrats on your win. ~~
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/11/2020 8:25:00 AM
Thank you Victor, so nice to see you back! hugs
Date: 9/9/2020 11:31:00 AM
Good one, Tania. Congratulations on your first-place win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2020 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 9/9/2020 9:52:00 AM
It would have seemed so important back then. Congrats on your win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Rick!
Date: 9/9/2020 4:41:00 AM
It was their loss my friend. Great Poem!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Mark!
Date: 9/9/2020 2:48:00 AM
- A sad one, Tania - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/9/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Date: 9/8/2020 5:37:00 PM
ouch, that would hurt. I remember getting into top ten for jr. high cheerleaders (teachers voting) but student body narrowed it to six or seven and naturally I lost . Still hurts to this day! (I was never one of the "popular" kids)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/8/2020 6:26:00 PM
It's funny how we remember the painful experiences over the wonderful ones, thanks for your visit Andrea!
Date: 9/7/2020 7:19:00 PM
As tennis legend Chris Evert Lloyd used to say: The winners are the ones who learn from and recover from their losses!... Looks like you've rebounded just fine, Tania! Smiles for Miles, Gershon
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/8/2020 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Gershon!
Date: 9/7/2020 1:12:00 PM
Your pen did a great write. So very true about a life lesson. Guess we all learn them along the way. Enjoy your day writing away.................
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/8/2020 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Paula!
Date: 9/7/2020 7:28:00 AM
Wow ~ beautifully penned, Kim. The 'again' is powerful and the turn perfect.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/8/2020 2:35:00 AM
Thank you Line

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