A Life Lesson

I did not make the color-guard team again, a life lesson of loss.

9/7/2020

Contest: My Most Unforgettable Moment in High School
Sponsor: JCB Burl
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Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Creative line for the contest. Reads like a good contender. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 2:11 AM
One must learn to take th smooth with the rough. Congrats on your win. ~~
Kitchin Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Victor, so nice to see you back! hugs
Roper Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 11:31 AM
Good one, Tania. Congratulations on your first-place win.
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Eve!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 9:52 AM
It would have seemed so important back then. Congrats on your win.
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Rick!
Koplin Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 4:41 AM
It was their loss my friend. Great Poem!
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Mark!
Andresen Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 2:48 AM
- A sad one, Tania - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 5:37 PM
ouch, that would hurt. I remember getting into top ten for jr. high cheerleaders (teachers voting) but student body narrowed it to six or seven and naturally I lost . Still hurts to this day! (I was never one of the "popular" kids)
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 6:26 PM
It's funny how we remember the painful experiences over the wonderful ones, thanks for your visit Andrea!
Wolf Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:19 PM
As tennis legend Chris Evert Lloyd used to say: The winners are the ones who learn from and recover from their losses!... Looks like you've rebounded just fine, Tania! Smiles for Miles, Gershon
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:35 AM
Thank you Gershon!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Your pen did a great write. So very true about a life lesson. Guess we all learn them along the way. Enjoy your day writing away.................
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:35 AM
Thank you Paula!
Gauthier Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Wow ~ beautifully penned, Kim. The 'again' is powerful and the turn perfect.
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:35 AM
Thank you Line
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