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A Lie

A new fresh linen hangs on my line
I stray from that tasks that generate jaded tears
with my bare toes I trace a fine vine
the taunting that I bear from my peers

Behold your very eyes
the  king has come to tide
he looks as if he has come from Bise
the noble horse that he rides
overcomes him and snickers in laughter

Next in the line of overcoming laughter
strides in a jester full of poise
does not ponder of what comes after
streaming unbanned is levity for all the young girls and boys

The final visage that enlightens the venturesome parade
is a conductor with no orchestra in tow
an orchestra in his vast mind, the nonsensical tirade
hitching his fine tailcoats while riding a sow

My eyes waver back from the haziness that there was
it was all a dream
an
     Alice
             in
                  Wonderland?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2010 5:41:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Shiki. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:40:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Shiki. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:19:00 PM
Yes this is quite Alice in Wonderlandish. Good job!! LUv, andrea
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